wisteria sinensis [heptaduad*]
blue on a bright daypurple when its greybounding billows form swellsthat break in shadowed dellsor crown hillswith swaying spillsof heavy-headed richnesshung with flagrant thicknesson a sturdy...
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Ok Ben...first let me start with an apology, I already know I don't have the wisdom or the knowledge or the understanding to judge others work, consiquently all I can comment on with any authority is...
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Dear Angel:i deeply appreciate your input.i have no idea why you are taking this so seriously,but i don't plan to fight it. FIRST:your criteria for judging and mineare EXACTLY the SAME...i could not...
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I love the imagery here, and the use of words. The sounds create pictures for me, the use of alliteration and the rolling vowels enhance the description perfectly."Idiot, n. A member of a large and...
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It's all in the eye of the beholder, Ben...and I enjoyed this foray into a new style! I read Jinx's thoughts with interest...and there are a couple of places where the meter is not quite on the...
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You see Ben, I was serious, not so much about what I was saying, but rather that I was saying it at all. It seems that I am always wrong and heavy handed in my errors. Read what Valoe and Soulsease...
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Hi Ben,Well, "wisteria" caught my attention right away here, sinceI love it. This seemed to be very intricate in a descriptiveway, just as the blooms of wisteria are. I'm glad to have read this...
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Ben, I agree that this version has clearer images and flows more smoothly. Thespianna
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(((Jinx)))you were not wrong - apart from matters of metre and form restrictions - interpretation and ones gut reaction to a piece is *all* that matters. There is no reason at all that your comments...
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yeah...what she said. Lemon-Eating Swamp MonkeyANDItinerant Thread Killer
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Absolutely! Poetry is all about interpretation, not about right and wrong...every opinion carries equal weight on this board... Exit light...Enter night...Take my hand...We're off to never-never...
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Poetry is, I think, an emotion on paper...oh and who can judge emotion...think Soulsease made a most valid point.........this poem is a mood for me...I love the subtle changes in tune with the...
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Hi Ben,I like the images of both versions but like Angel, I prefer the first one. I had to scroll back and find your first poem as well so I could compare them. It was like a touch of de-ja-vu. I...
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